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Old 12-27-06, 10:56 AM   #4
Perpetual Emnity
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i liked this, the beat was nice, and nothin wrong w/ addressin the ladies track every once in awhile, i understand it was a "freestyle" but still was a little short. Lyricly it was good, got the messege across, but was nothing lyricly amazing. The emotion came across very well, it was easy to understand how it felt, and what emotions you were trying to get out. It was mixed very well, the quality was good, and your flow was decent as well. My only complaint is that songs w/ a topic like this one (females here) shouldnt be without a hook or be longer. IMO, a song about females is a topical, and i dont like when those do not come equipped with a hook and at least second verse. But good job!

PS....u did this on christmas???? Come on, cheer up! Its the holidays! nah, jus playin, i got dumped day after christmas so wasnt nothin special for me neither, but...good drop!
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