hahah... ur concept is like A Beautiful Mind

this vibe is perfect on the hook... with the beat... really feelin that openin.... most people dont get the vibe right just try and flow nice and make good lines... ur flow is real nice on this shit... i liek the contrast of the verse and the hook... def sounds mixed differently too

verse 2 has a decent story on it..... some nice lyrics, but not much to say about it cusz im tryin to pay attention... hook is fuckin sick as ive sed for this beat..... u can fit the melody of it pretty well.... this track is ur best in a while man.... good u repeated the hook at the end, really couldnt get enough of it... u shouldve prolly done some adlibs in the last hook for alil switch up

.... god damn, u spent alotta time it seems perfectin this track mixin wise... its CRAZY SON.... i think this might ur best put together song ever..... props, mad props on bein an ARTIST, not just a rapper. 1

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