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Old 01-05-07, 06:07 PM   #7
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Apoc

You're a fucking bum kid and all of your business ventures will sink son
So I'll start singing Beg, Steal or Borrow...
... & Remind us all of the only ways you get income
^^Decent at best.

Datrus stepped the league up so that it's seen a flourish of bars
It seems everyone's cut the crap so much you're fucking covered in scars
^^A bad flip on a cliche.

I'll smash my fist through your mouth so nothing could impare your grief
So that the only crown you'll EVER wear will be the one that repairs your teeth
^^Horrible flip.

You're played and wack which only means that your ass'll get whored
& You use such a attired style you could dominate at the fashion awards
^^Not bad, seems a bit watered down.

I'll destroy you in the votes and fucking prove you're the shittest wreck
But how could you take the lead when it's never been removed from your bitches neck?
^^What? No.

This contest's so one sided it'll render you slain and devoid
Last time I demolished a Dime this bad half your savings were destroyed
^^Not bad...





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Sonny

Yo,you better get the best detective ,I'm killin this cat he easy like an elective
my gun give him so many pops,he'll look at his mom wit a different perspective
^^Your flow is soooo stretched... the punch is funny, though.

Listen I'ma help you put your worries away and look good, cuz ur life is pathetic
After I Tag you upp dogg, only thing thats goin to be running to u is paramedics
^^Nah, lame.

Dude's a scrub rocks old kicks, ripped jeans, and can't even pick up a wack broad
Plus his pants run up his ass so much , they can be captain of the track squad
^^Could have been a lot better, but decent.

Prey on lil bitches like this cat, its because of Sonny the streets aint safe at night
have this kid in my basement playin Russian Roullete alone, juss to save his life
^^What? This was lame.

And Dimebags don't need a nine to five, Ill just post and sell these hott drugs
I ain't a total quiter, I will fill out one App though...................full of hott slugs
^^Could have been flipped better, but i dig.

And I seen the way u rap thinkin ur Ghostface, but from me still get no respect
After I put your nose to the ground, they can at least call you Inspectah Deck
^^Really poor tie in, took away from the impact.


I'm going with Sonny based on his opener and app lines. I didn't like either of your wording very much but overall Sonny came fresher and hit just a bit harder.

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Sonny Dimebags
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