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Old 12-31-06, 10:41 AM   #1
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LBL Contendership: 3. Appocolyptik (4-0) vs. 4. Sonny Dimebags (18-8)

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Old 01-03-07, 11:34 AM   #2
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Check

I'll either drop tonight or tommorow, if you drop first then don't go over 20.
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Old 01-04-07, 09:41 AM   #3
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Old 01-04-07, 04:53 PM   #4
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You're a fucking bum kid and all of your business ventures will sink son
So I'll start singing Beg, Steal or Borrow...
... & Remind us all of the only ways you get income
Datrus stepped the league up so that it's seen a flourish of bars
It seems everyone's cut the crap so much you're fucking covered in scars
I'll smash my fist through your mouth so nothing could impare your grief
So that the only crown you'll EVER wear will be the one that repairs your teeth
You're played and wack which only means that your ass'll get whored
& You use such a attired style you could dominate at the fashion awards
I'll destroy you in the votes and fucking prove you're the shittest wreck
But how could you take the lead when it's never been removed from your bitches neck?
This contest's so one sided it'll render you slain and devoid
Last time I demolished a Dime this bad half your savings were destroyed

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Old 01-04-07, 11:30 PM   #5
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Ightt
Yo,you better get the best detective ,I'm killin this cat he easy like an elective
my gun give him so many pops,he'll look at his mom wit a different perspective
Listen I'ma help you put your worries away and look good, cuz ur life is pathetic
After I Tag you upp dogg, only thing thats goin to be running to u is paramedics
Dude's a scrub rocks old kicks, ripped jeans, and can't even pick up a wack broad
Plus his pants run up his ass so much , they can be captain of the track squad
Prey on lil bitches like this cat, its because of Sonny the streets aint safe at night
have this kid in my basement playin Russian Roullete alone, juss to save his life
And Dimebags don't need a nine to five, Ill just post and sell these hott drugs
I ain't a total quiter, I will fill out one App though...................full of hott slugs
And I seen the way u rap thinkin ur Ghostface, but from me still get no respect
After I put your nose to the ground, they can at least call you Inspectah Deck

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Old 01-05-07, 06:03 PM   #6
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Upping for votes

Anyone who votes in this battle will have a fair vote returned in their battle by myself and hopefully Sonny.
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Old 01-05-07, 06:07 PM   #7
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Apoc

You're a fucking bum kid and all of your business ventures will sink son
So I'll start singing Beg, Steal or Borrow...
... & Remind us all of the only ways you get income
^^Decent at best.

Datrus stepped the league up so that it's seen a flourish of bars
It seems everyone's cut the crap so much you're fucking covered in scars
^^A bad flip on a cliche.

I'll smash my fist through your mouth so nothing could impare your grief
So that the only crown you'll EVER wear will be the one that repairs your teeth
^^Horrible flip.

You're played and wack which only means that your ass'll get whored
& You use such a attired style you could dominate at the fashion awards
^^Not bad, seems a bit watered down.

I'll destroy you in the votes and fucking prove you're the shittest wreck
But how could you take the lead when it's never been removed from your bitches neck?
^^What? No.

This contest's so one sided it'll render you slain and devoid
Last time I demolished a Dime this bad half your savings were destroyed
^^Not bad...





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Sonny

Yo,you better get the best detective ,I'm killin this cat he easy like an elective
my gun give him so many pops,he'll look at his mom wit a different perspective
^^Your flow is soooo stretched... the punch is funny, though.

Listen I'ma help you put your worries away and look good, cuz ur life is pathetic
After I Tag you upp dogg, only thing thats goin to be running to u is paramedics
^^Nah, lame.

Dude's a scrub rocks old kicks, ripped jeans, and can't even pick up a wack broad
Plus his pants run up his ass so much , they can be captain of the track squad
^^Could have been a lot better, but decent.

Prey on lil bitches like this cat, its because of Sonny the streets aint safe at night
have this kid in my basement playin Russian Roullete alone, juss to save his life
^^What? This was lame.

And Dimebags don't need a nine to five, Ill just post and sell these hott drugs
I ain't a total quiter, I will fill out one App though...................full of hott slugs
^^Could have been flipped better, but i dig.

And I seen the way u rap thinkin ur Ghostface, but from me still get no respect
After I put your nose to the ground, they can at least call you Inspectah Deck
^^Really poor tie in, took away from the impact.


I'm going with Sonny based on his opener and app lines. I didn't like either of your wording very much but overall Sonny came fresher and hit just a bit harder.

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Old 01-05-07, 06:40 PM   #8
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You're a fucking bum kid and all of your business ventures will sink son
So I'll start singing Beg, Steal or Borrow...
... & Remind us all of the only ways you get income
This contest's so one sided it'll render you slain and devoid
Last time I demolished a Dime this bad half your savings were destroyed

vs.

Dude's a scrub rocks old kicks, ripped jeans, and can't even pick up a wack broad
Plus his pants run up his ass so much , they can be captain of the track squad


pretty close battle, both came iight but Appocolyptik came harder by a little n' had more quotes

v/ Appocolyptik

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Old 01-05-07, 06:57 PM   #9
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Appocolyptik
You're a fucking bum kid and all of your business ventures will sink son
So I'll start singing Beg, Steal or Borrow...
... & Remind us all of the only ways you get income
Datrus stepped the league up so that it's seen a flourish of bars
It seems everyone's cut the crap so much you're fucking covered in scars
You're played and wack which only means that your ass'll get whored
& You use such a attired style you could dominate at the fashion awards
This contest's so one sided it'll render you slain and devoid
Last time I demolished a Dime this bad half your savings were destroyed

Sonny Dimebags

Yo,you better get the best detective ,I'm killin this cat he easy like an elective
my gun give him so many pops,he'll look at his mom wit a different perspective
Dude's a scrub rocks old kicks, ripped jeans, and can't even pick up a wack broad
Plus his pants run up his ass so much , they can be captain of the track squad
And Dimebags don't need a nine to five, Ill just post and sell these hott drugs
I ain't a total quiter, I will fill out one App though...................full of hott slugs
And I seen the way u rap thinkin ur Ghostface, but from me still get no respect
After I put your nose to the ground, they can at least call you Inspectah Deck

Both had equal quotables, but I like Sonny's a tad better.

V/ Sonny Dimebags
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Old 01-05-07, 07:05 PM   #10
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You're a fucking bum kid and all of your business ventures will sink son
So I'll start singing Beg, Steal or Borrow...
... & Remind us all of the only ways you get income
Datrus stepped the league up so that it's seen a flourish of bars
It seems everyone's cut the crap so much you're fucking covered in scars

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Yo,you better get the best detective ,I'm killin this cat he easy like an elective
my gun give him so many pops,he'll look at his mom wit a different perspective

The line I quoted from Sonny was the only one I liked because of the concept...I didn't like his wording or set up or follow through at all. It was a good concept though so I quoted it. Its just the punch was irrelavent to the rest of the bar really. His other stuff was full of filler and the inpectah deck line was just something he must have tossed in because he need an extra line. Appoc came with some comical lines...the first lines I quoted from him felt kind of stretch but it was a good concept n it made me laugh a bit. His scars line was comical n very well worded as well. Didn't really like anything too much after this though. But he gets my vote based on hared hitting and better written concepts n punches.

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Old 01-05-07, 07:45 PM   #11
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You're a fucking bum kid and all of your business ventures will sink son
So I'll start singing Beg, Steal or Borrow...
... & Remind us all of the only ways you get income
You're played and wack which only means that your ass'll get whored
& You use such a attired style you could dominate at the fashion awards
I'll destroy you in the votes and fucking prove you're the shittest wreck
But how could you take the lead when it's never been removed from your bitches neck?


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Dude's a scrub rocks old kicks, ripped jeans, and can't even pick up a wack broad
Plus his pants run up his ass so much , they can be captain of the track squad



Wow, I am shocked at how Sonny has gotten any votes in this. He dropped pretty decent over in the WBL but this verse was just shockingly bad for him. He had nothing but poorly worded punches and its like he didn't try at all or was just not having a good day. That pants run up the ass line was decent but Joe killed this battle with a better verse and more quotables. That lead line was probably the line of the battle, LMFAO!!

V/ - Appocolyptik
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Old 01-05-07, 07:50 PM   #12
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You're a fucking bum kid and all of your business ventures will sink son
So I'll start singing Beg, Steal or Borrow...
... & Remind us all of the only ways you get income
Datrus stepped the league up so that it's seen a flourish of bars
It seems everyone's cut the crap so much you're fucking covered in scars

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Dude's a scrub rocks old kicks, ripped jeans, and can't even pick up a wack broad
Plus his pants run up his ass so much , they can be captain of the track squad

v//Appo
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Old 01-05-07, 08:21 PM   #13
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You're a fucking bum kid and all of your business ventures will sink son
So I'll start singing Beg, Steal or Borrow...
... & Remind us all of the only ways you get income
Datrus stepped the league up so that it's seen a flourish of bars
It seems everyone's cut the crap so much you're fucking covered in scars
Nice

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Dude's a scrub rocks old kicks, ripped jeans, and can't even pick up a wack broad
Plus his pants run up his ass so much , they can be captain of the track squad
Okay


Apocc got it pretty easily imo you know, it was kinda even in my mind but I looked really quick and I saw it wasn't that close..

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Old 01-06-07, 12:06 AM   #14
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Old 01-07-07, 01:34 AM   #15
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Appocolyptik WINS 5-0
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