You're a fucking bum kid and all of your business ventures will sink son
So I'll start singing Beg, Steal or Borrow...
... & Remind us all of the only ways you get income
Datrus stepped the league up so that it's seen a flourish of bars
It seems everyone's cut the crap so much you're fucking covered in scars

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Yo,you better get the best detective ,I'm killin this cat he easy like an elective
my gun give him so many pops,he'll look at his mom wit a different perspective

The line I quoted from Sonny was the only one I liked because of the concept...I didn't like his wording or set up or follow through at all. It was a good concept though so I quoted it. Its just the punch was irrelavent to the rest of the bar really. His other stuff was full of filler and the inpectah deck line was just something he must have tossed in because he need an extra line. Appoc came with some comical lines...the first lines I quoted from him felt kind of stretch but it was a good concept n it made me laugh a bit. His scars line was comical n very well worded as well. Didn't really like anything too much after this though. But he gets my vote based on hared hitting and better written concepts n punches.

V/ Appocolyptic

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..