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Old 03-12-07, 01:18 AM   #2
Lay.
don't try.
 
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meh.. this was okay, you should throw in some multi's in your verses, it makes it flow alot better, i got where you were comin from though..it had descent structure for what you were tryin to do.. it was cool, keep elevatin dude
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