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03-12-07, 12:55 AM
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New to RV
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............letz Get It...........
IP: 5492 2C2E
LETS GET IT, AND THATS ALL KNOW...
OLD HEADS TAUGHT ME NEVER SLOW MY ROLE... KEEP MY MIND FOCUSED AND HANDLE MY OWN... GET MY OWN BREAD AND RISE TO DA HEAD... STAY ON DA STREET, NEVER TALK TO DA FEDS... AND BUBBLE HARD ON U NIGGAS, JUST LIKE SODA FIZZ... NEVER HAVE ANOTHA NIGGA RUNNIN UR BIZZ.. KEEP DA HAMMER ON U TO OPEN UP WIGS... CUZ DA GAME COLD, JUST LIKE A FREEZA... ANOTHER MAN WILL STAB U IN UR BACK AS SOON AS HE MEET CHA.. SO MY POEPLE OUT THERE, DONT LET DA GAME EAT CHA... MAKE GAME HOW U WANT IT BRING UR OWN FEATURES... COME SEE ME I'LL B UR TEACHER... BUT, IF U CROSS DA LINE, ILL SEND U TO MEET JESUS... OPEN UP UR SKALP, EAT IT LIKE RECESS-PIECES... IMA STAY REAL, ALL IM LOOKIN FO IS A DEAL http://www.rapveresecom/forum/showthread.php?t=329222 http://www.rapverse.com/forum/showthread.php?t=329490
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Last edited by Mindstate : 03-15-07 at 09:41 AM. |
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03-12-07, 01:18 AM
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don't try.
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
meh.. this was okay, you should throw in some multi's in your verses, it makes it flow alot better, i got where you were comin from though..it had descent structure for what you were tryin to do.. it was cool, keep elevatin dude
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03-14-07, 08:53 AM
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Black Poet
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IP: 860D ECBB
This was alright decent drop,... need to work on a few things, elevate you
mind. Stay up |
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03-15-07, 09:42 AM
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why so serious!!??
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IP: 2020 96DE
im'a let it slide this time cuz u got links but they dont go nowhere..make sure next time you got working links
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03-15-07, 08:09 PM
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IP: 3E9E 35FE
I Didnt Feel Like This Piece Went Anywhere....... Way Too Short....... Played Topics...... You Need To Solidify You're Structure Man..... Take A Look At Some Good Text Drops And You'll Soon Start To Recognise The Acapella Flows......
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