halla at me" at the begining, show your funny accent. kinda goofy through out. your adlibs seem off on the hooks and in the verse they decent though. verse is decent no stand out lines, but a decent track, real short for real. and what dude said above. go over hook and drop another verse and i'd be good.
rtf..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=240645

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