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Old 04-30-07, 09:21 PM   #13
TeamOne
FuxJustAWord
 
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So.... i listened to this and.... i must say that the quality for this shit was amazing... really crisp and can feel the warmth, i guess....

but im not really a fan of this chopped and screwed part in this song... sounds alittle off beat, or just awkward.... and i think the lyrics for that part are wack.... i probably wouldve liked it better if u had just created a catchy hook for this part

but anyways... ur verses are pretty good... takin shots at CarsonJet??? hah.... and also i still really cant believe how nice this quality right now.... it is studio sounding.... but to be honest... i think u really fell of in ur third verse... lyrically, and ESPECIALLY flow wise... it seems like u fell off

overall its a hot track tho.... keep it up

-One
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