*listenin* ... i have a song called Comin For Me... so i feel this is a direct diss

dude... sometimes it feels like ur voice blends in with the bass so much that i lose some of ur worse wen i have the bass up loud... hah... u always come with some hardcore (ill kick ur ass lyrics) ... i dont really like ur whole rippin out the heart concept u had goin but u presented well

that hook was pretty decent... especially the second half of it wen u pumped up the emotion....

second verse person is decent... hes got the straight filler-punch filler-punch style... some of them really dont hit for me, but its pretty decent... he sounds alittle too chill for such a stressed hook

wow... the song seemed to be alittle short and ended abruptly, but it fits with the concept... this shit was decent but ive heard better from u.... i think u needa switch up ur concepts alittle more tho... or maybe i just always catch u on the hardcore track, who knows

-One

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