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Originally Posted by ELRey
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Okay I'm going to critique I LOVE YOU AND YOU HATE ME
Production(since i know you made the beat):This beat is good for the most part. The sound and sampling is good. I really like how you played out the kids voices that was tight. The only thing I really didn't like was the snare. I think you should've made that harder hitting snare and that would've been better. The hi-hat sounds good the way you mixed it.
okay i'm going to skip tito since hes not the one that i'm breaking down
EL REY: your voice is very unique. I think that thats one of your strong points. Your swaggers okay and I think its better than a lot of people on here. I think that the way you spit attracts your listeners. I think that the thing you should mostly work on is making your lyrics flow better. You have potential to be a beast on the mic. Your lyrics are an other strong point I've noticed lately you've really been wanting to hit that metaphorical type of lyric which is a plus.
Overall this is a pretty good track one of the more listenable tracks on this site.