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Originally Posted by Tzar
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I'm going to get on a critque for "Oh Lord"
Production:This beat is pretty generic. but it sounds good regardless. Sounds like something eminem would make.
TZAR:Your lyrics and the way you make them flow are good. But you dont have much swagger with your voice which makes it hard to stay with you. I think you should switch up your vocal tones a little bit to make you sound more cocky. THat makes people listen to you. Your lyrics and your flow are fine but yoru swagger and lack of proper delivery is what makes it kind of boring. You def. have something going though.
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