I was feelin' this piece, imagery and nice strucutre to it, the theme was something that you did nicely in producing a nice image for me to view...
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Die in name of.." preaches a bearded scholar
Hate breeding ignorance, ignorance unto hate..
Martyrdom achieved, to burning circle's growth
As heaven slowly fades into rivers of blood**
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Personally I like the first one better, a nice strong piece right here, you held some nice religious undertones as Necromencer said, a very nice one kidd...
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