thats really deep.. i like this peace... it was good...shows alot of troubles u have or had now and in ur past... first 4 lines were dope. very impacting and creative.... to my eyes anyways. i say u make ur pieces longer... ive noticed u make them only 16 lines. well make 48 lines and kick in a chorus... be a little better.. i look at this as only the tip of the ice berge of what u really want to say and express... keep it up hommes. pretty dope shit..