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09-22-07, 04:43 PM | #1 | |||||||
dope
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feelings turn bad
IP: AAEB 3D81
the first day i woke my life was ready to be choked
and now i feel smoked really wish i never awoke growin up dis way i never thought this could be me you could never understand what kind of things i see cuz all i see is an empty world and go from day 2 day wish we could all fuck away instead of livin afraid and it's 2 bad we got families we know we cant relie on dont be fooled by em der my enemies i cant take sight off wot do u do when the fuckers wont even let you be do u understand wot ur doin ur makin me wanna leave but leave for good cuz i feel misunderstood u really stood on me id kill u if i really could but is it worth it bitch u peope look down on me like im worthless but when u take a hard look at urself why u think u got a purpous cuz we're all the same the weaker ones dont speak a word we just dont give a fuck we just pretend we never heard |
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09-23-07, 09:10 AM | #2 | ||||
-da prophit-
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IP: AAEF 7DDC
thats really deep.. i like this peace... it was good...shows alot of troubles u have or had now and in ur past... first 4 lines were dope. very impacting and creative.... to my eyes anyways. i say u make ur pieces longer... ive noticed u make them only 16 lines. well make 48 lines and kick in a chorus... be a little better.. i look at this as only the tip of the ice berge of what u really want to say and express... keep it up hommes. pretty dope shit..
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10-11-07, 12:53 PM | #3 | |||
сварливый
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IP: 30B6 8894
You have 3 Days To Post 1 Or More Links In Order To Keep This Open Mic Open, According To New Rules. Do So Or This Will Be Closed & Moved.
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10-13-07, 09:17 PM | #4 | ||||
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IP: 9DB6 FE91
Technique, this was a descent drop. I did not really see any clever word usage or anything that stood out from the other drops, but you remained on topic very well and did a good job with the deliverance of this passage.
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11-08-07, 07:56 AM | #5 | |||||||
I made it and il end it
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IP: 0AD2 683A
this probably has bin ur best drop!!! keep it up!!! try writing sumthing that has nothing to do with ur mum or family in it!! find a new topic and work from there ai8t.peace
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