this is ok at best. Its really simple bro, nothing stood out to me like, "damn, this kids dope"

I had to think twice about closing it as its on the level of somthing that should be posted in 'cyphers keystyle' But ill leave it open for the fuck of it.

The metas in this are weak as fuck. "Ill leave your girl wet like shes soaked in rain' basically a no brainer there.

You need to try get alot more technical in your writing, cause this is simple and not good at all.

Real talk.