sum of ya lines here were tight as fuck such as :

I'm on top of my game like I was standin' in wait on the top of the globe.//
droppin' raps that's toppin' craps spit by mc's like tha doc an' slim, hittin' home.//

or listen or some shit that isn't dissin', and gittin' on my last nerve.//
'cause if ya even thinkin' an' ill thought or cop a das-verse, I swear that'll be ya last words.//
make sure ya crash first, play'n a game a chicken ya damn right I'm the first ta swerve.//

those lines got sum tight little rhyme schemes in them. but sum of ya other lines either diddnt have the flow to match or just diddnt work as well overall. but still u got sum well nice parts in this. 7.5/10 anyway check mine not on me (war) aight peace lad