it was a good piece, heaps common though, u get more replies to topics that are original.. not pickin on u or ne thing though.. vocab was alil elementary but u had some good lines like...
i cant control all the cards startin to unfold/
so u gotta keep cut stay sharp try hard at ya goals/

and

spray cans young artist you gotta start somewhere/
cause life witout artist man this world would be no where/

i like those lines.. keep spittin
peace out