this was nice, almost didnt seem like it was off the dome, the only part i didnt like was

"Why the fuck did i have to be so FUCKIN DUMB//
ahhh I couldnt take that shit no more//
I had to leave, so i walked right out the fuckin door//"

i it wasnt as good as the rest of it and the "fuckin" just seemed to be in there at random, i dont like random cusswords but if thats your style do it and keep elevating.

BTW thanks for the replys to mine.