well nice work. not the best i have seen from you. i know this isnt to me. as i read it. i couldnt relate to it. but the rhyme scheme was nice. i dont know about the topic. but overall it was a good piece

8-10.

oh and by the way. you think you could provide me with a couple topics for my writing. i have terrible writers block. thx man. oh and by the way. i did know all of that stuff you told me in the pm..

*im smarter than you think*

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