aight my imput is isn't takin ikely most of the time but check it this post has a lot of potential the problem is you stopped too soon you may want to go finish this verse and then edit this i can't say too much on it not enough there but what is there is good so just keep doin what you're doin and add a little more, talk more on who ever it is you wrote this on like how or why they died and what not get creative with some storytellin aight

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shut the fuck up

even if i stutter i'll still sh-sh-shit on you/ pun

dead in middle of little of little italy
little did we know that we riddle
some middle man who didn't do ditally/ pun