tell me wat y'all think

Time Line

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time time time, it go's by but people still do dye
time time time, it go's by and you don't know why
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Time go's by and still I cry fo you//
try to bury feeling so I smoke a blunt or two//
so yea I'm asking why its got ta by like this//
my heart go's out to your dad and sis//
all I need is one wish, one wish//
whys god got ta keep serving up this cold ass dish//
so I'll play your tunes one more time//
I hope that why're gona be just fine//
I know its selfish but I gots ta be//
one day we'll meet again and crack open a beer just you and me//
only 19 what a waste of so much potential//
staying true its wat you got ta do its essential//
I'm fighting holly demons in the mental//
Time go's by and I know why//
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time time time, it go's by but people still do dye
time time time, it go's by and you don't know why
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its a work in progress I'm working on the other two they be posted later so tell me wat y'all think.