aight dog look you concentated on the flow and not enough on you punches and what not
1.lines to small make em longer
2.get a bigger vocabulary
3.good flow
4.aight wordplay
5.you need a constant rhymescheme abab or aabb
6.need multis
7.work on metas other than that it was aight hit me up if you dont know what any of that meanz aight holla