BANNED - Pink Slipped
From: Being "investigated" fuckin ban me, u fuckin narcs |
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IP:
^^ thats forced poetry brother ^^
that was written to look like the standard of poetry,
while ur intentions were good, the poem wasent
to write a poem, it doesnt come from the heart
none of that corny ass shit, it comes from ur hand
just write it man, dont mention any of these werds, EVER
death, love, sorrow, hate, color, homosexual, trapped
blaitent, mother, addiction, or theres 3 together, i love you
take the advice ur on ur way to writing good, readable poetry,
but very bad for your first try, no beef peace mayne
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