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ive never droped a poetic experence in here before.. but im droppin one now
just look in the eyes and see whats true the souls deep within the pupils.... look beyond the black look beyond the white see past the color whats held back unity, for so long, my tears are bitter sweat but i need you to need me, somthing that makes sence rejected before you even get a chance to change not a chance, your first impression counts its everlasting to whom it may concern making me tick inside, i yearn for control i burn from the soul, losing hope so i drown myself with substance my escape from what my escape im trapped no escape from my escape untill i grow out of my teenage phase i am cursed with an image, exploding rage resides deep within the soul, look deep, find your answers within the eye of a child force the double trapped in the grasps that society has it all untill i fall, i stand tall |
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^^ thats forced poetry brother ^^
that was written to look like the standard of poetry, while ur intentions were good, the poem wasent to write a poem, it doesnt come from the heart none of that corny ass shit, it comes from ur hand just write it man, dont mention any of these werds, EVER death, love, sorrow, hate, color, homosexual, trapped blaitent, mother, addiction, or theres 3 together, i love you take the advice ur on ur way to writing good, readable poetry, but very bad for your first try, no beef peace mayne |
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IP: 6FA7 7304
ok buddy, and yes their is beef fool, you ''pulled some gradeschool shit'' and tatled on my ass to TheEnd, you dickridin fagot
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