ive never droped a poetic experence in here before.. but im droppin one now


just look in the eyes and see whats true
the souls deep within the pupils....
look beyond the black
look beyond the white
see past the color
whats held back unity, for so long, my tears are bitter sweat
but i need you to need me, somthing that makes sence
rejected before you even get a chance to change
not a chance, your first impression counts
its everlasting to whom it may concern
making me tick inside, i yearn for control
i burn from the soul, losing hope
so i drown myself with substance
my escape


from what


my escape


im trapped


no escape


from my escape

untill i grow out of my teenage phase
i am cursed with an image, exploding rage resides deep within the soul,

look deep, find your answers within the eye of a child
force the double

trapped in the grasps that society has it all
untill i fall, i stand tall

^^ thats forced poetry brother ^^

that was written to look like the standard of poetry,

while ur intentions were good, the poem wasent

to write a poem, it doesnt come from the heart

none of that corny ass shit, it comes from ur hand

just write it man, dont mention any of these werds, EVER

death, love, sorrow, hate, color, homosexual, trapped
blaitent, mother, addiction, or theres 3 together, i love you

take the advice ur on ur way to writing good, readable poetry,

but very bad for your first try, no beef peace mayne