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Old 05-08-03, 11:58 AM   #2
Bmack
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Nice combination of flow, Good lines. I like.

Slice lines like a rapture-and idea cant be capture-use lines~ in~ pairs to battle and stick you with compound fractures-
I serve my purpose- to leave you rednecks nervous-fucking marloboro men buying they wardrobe on proof of purchase-nigguz is penny for thoughts get of the world you worthless- utilize nouns and poetry to kill physically-so when I say id kill you in battle that means literetly-
using the vocab-of an angry arab-distiquished-cursing you out with his little pronousable English-
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