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Old 05-08-03, 11:35 AM   #1
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complex simple punchlines lol

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I CONJURE WORDS to serve various actions on HERBS –
So a punchline from me is a defined CONJUGATING VERB-
Who wanna slapbox-with NONCENTZ the human classic without reeboks-
The day the bastard stop spitting BaRS I’d graduate from detox-
Till then my rhyme file is drunken style like SAM SNEED-
Freestyle’s are pedefile make you fruity fagets cherry’s bleed-
No peace flag-dress rappers in RODMANS drag-
spray them in CONTRADICTION cologne and have them strait bash on gay fags-
see for me being number one aint part of the plan-
it’s world domination NON CENTZ wrote it so if you QOUTE IT your just as fucked up as I am-
wanna impress me don’t dick ride swallow and gargle-wanna be M.K.C use an aids patient for a POSISTIVE role model-cause I don’t give a suck has always been my motto-
use to bust you in your face like you were dick riding and forgot to swallow-
most m.c.’s are callow-
you know who you are- I can tell by your feminen vasaud-kill you in a sentence ,convicted then afflicted for fraud-you cant fuck with the god-
that’s blasphemy-I put words together so my rhyme body go hand and hand like anatomy-
Slice lines like a rapture-and idea cant be capture-use lines~ in~ pairs to battle and stick you with compound fractures-
I serve my purpose- to leave you rednecks nervous-fucking marloboro men buying they wardrobe on proof of purchase-nigguz is penny for thoughts get of the world you worthless- utilize nouns and poetry to kill physically-so when I say id kill you in battle that means literetly-
using the vocab-of an angry arab-distiquished-cursing you out with his little pronousable English-im ill like I had yeast burns in my tongue~hot like rappers I battled had to be extinguished-when I dicharge a load with no gun-.
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Old 05-08-03, 11:58 AM   #2
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Nice combination of flow, Good lines. I like.

Slice lines like a rapture-and idea cant be capture-use lines~ in~ pairs to battle and stick you with compound fractures-
I serve my purpose- to leave you rednecks nervous-fucking marloboro men buying they wardrobe on proof of purchase-nigguz is penny for thoughts get of the world you worthless- utilize nouns and poetry to kill physically-so when I say id kill you in battle that means literetly-
using the vocab-of an angry arab-distiquished-cursing you out with his little pronousable English-
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Old 05-08-03, 12:10 PM   #3
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ANY COMPLAINTS
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Old 05-08-03, 12:40 PM   #4
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No sorry no complaints lol, nice drop dawg
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Old 05-08-03, 12:43 PM   #5
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good stuff. i had the flow goin the first time. dats a good sign cauz im a noob.
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Old 05-08-03, 01:17 PM   #6
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yea that shit was tight i was feelin the flows and punchlines keep it up dawg no complaints
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Old 05-08-03, 03:08 PM   #7
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uppin
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Old 05-08-03, 03:22 PM   #8
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I got a complaint.. this sucks.. lmfao.. jus kiddin' dawg.. it was pretty ill, you had some nice ass punches there but also some simple ones.. thus the title I guess..
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Old 05-08-03, 10:28 PM   #9
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YOU GET IT RIGHT?
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Old 05-08-03, 10:37 PM   #10
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shit was ok lol
pretty hot punchs man and flow, definatly had some good creativity goin man i liked that a lot

do me a favor and crit my drop looking down on rap
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Old 05-09-03, 07:59 AM   #11
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you blow
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Old 05-09-03, 08:00 AM   #12
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Old 05-09-03, 08:01 AM   #13
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uppin
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Old 05-09-03, 08:02 AM   #14
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nice drop, the detix line was fuckin bomb,

english line, damn, thats good shit

i could sack it and sell it to the herbs in my sig

tax them cuz talents a lil dry this season, u can only get it if you know the right ppl

i always got it, maybee not on hand, but its on deck

i just call it up its delivered to me cheap

any way

peace ThReE
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Old 05-09-03, 10:29 AM   #15
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thanks pop for confusing but posting on me lol
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