dang dawg, bash dont tell him whats bad, tell him waht he can improve on...dam...

Flow: Needs improvement man, its really choppy.
Vocab: Boring! No effence but i only read a lil, yet it was small.
Length: Make it bigger man.
Topic: Lame man, dont talk about gay stuff like money and how you can kick someones ass, speak the truth and speak it good and u'll be hott.

aight ya need improvement keep spittin and get better, and take a lookat my stuff.

-OuT-

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