Understatment said it-
damn, this was a sick verse. The content is what made it that way, and if it had some multis and such, it would've been a perfect 10.
he was right, multies and a more complex rhyme scheme and that piece right there woulda been as ill as it gets,
next piece step up tha word play and multies and little tougher rhyme scheme but keep that content how u get er