not sure if ill turn this into a full song.......but i noticed all the good writers on this site have been doing backpacker style raps lately and all the newbies are tring to be street but they sound like shit......so i figured i would show them how to do it. LOL

its been 17 long years im trapped in the struggle/
huddled making plans to get cash by the bundle/
trouble is where i live its kid of tuff to make bids/
we live in poverity moms tring to raise 3 kids/
reality is people are petro, they never let go/
survive threw beef just to hear the sarrows echo/
they make chests blow, its just another cycle/
michaels life's poet, but struggles my first decsiple/
rivals turn suicidal staring up at the street lights/
it aint right and night i hear the ignorant street fights/
teens lose life for coming lite on the triple beem/
it seems fiends will take a life for a pipe dream/
im never free to breath or induldge in glamous themes/
seen my life though retrospect, and ill never squeez techs/
but i wont hesitate to knock you out if you disrespect/
i read text books and bibles but they aint helping me/
id rather sit back and read through gambino diarys/

and thats how its done newbies..............it only took me 10 mins to write this its basicaly a freestyle, so all you newbies, if your going to rap about the streets please make it better then this if you cant do that then dont rap about the streets...........