Yeah, this is the shit that I like to read. True Life shit. Haha, definitley feeling this right here. Not the situation, but the way you just starting writing onit and couldn't stop. That's what caught my attention.



im 16..she knockin on 19's door..i lied about my age,
i keep it inside...not knowing the price i would have to pay
i got a new job...couldnt give her the attention you deserved,
her ex moved in...saying that "he couldnt live without her"
so she was playing me..my emotions were true,
you were fucking him while i was at work wondering about you


That's that shit right there.


FUCK YOU GOD...ive had enough of your bible...im through,
turned my back on religion to hide and deny its' truth

Ohhh...You may need to rethink that bar right there. Definitley not feeling that at all.


Overall, this was good. Keep em coming....Pz!