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Old 06-17-03, 04:43 AM   #2
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holy shit. I thought that was ill. The whole verse flowed amazing, and the multies made it flow better. Very good wordplay. Yer last bar there ending it, that was jus awesome. I loved how that worked. Favourite lines were:

Subliminal Sensations Excite Nerves` Kinetics/
Target Market, Dejected Pathetics Who`ll Do Anything To Be Respected/

The Population`s Been Overtaken With Fixations Of Self-Induced Desperation/
Displacin Intellect & Self-Respect Wit A Lack Hesitation For Takin Dictation, When Honor Met Its Replacement/
In Most Cases, A Subconscious Common Sense Would Normally Negate This/
But Blind Faith Is What Motivates This Man Who`s Faceless To Disgrace His Greatness/

While The Wanna Be Righteous Wage Wars With Words/
Afraid To Act, Instead They Ask, To be Given What They Deserve/

The Words That Crossed The Prophet`s Lips Predicted This In 1666/
A Millennium After The First Attempts To Convert Earth`s Inhabitants To Devil`s Advocates/
Now We Act As Walkin Catalysts, Afraid To Battle This Unnatural Bliss/
Rendered Defenseless By Mental Ignorance That`s Left Our Appendages Riddled With Impotence....

The Tale Of The Mindless Simpletons & The Frightened Citizens...They Take Different Paths To The Aftermath, But In The End, What`s The Difference???

lmao, so yea, I jus quoted like half the verse, but dawg, it was ill. good shit for sure, hope u stay on the site.

btw, if you wouldnt mind, could u peep my song "helpless" and drop some feed, Id really appreciate it!

Peace
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