wow...if you ever wanted to read a good topical
battle this was it.....shit you guys, that fuckin masterful..

13th - I liked ure shit. . very complex to a simple mans eye
however. I figured halfway through your story what the ending
was..a nice twist none the less

Sureal - Damn im glad i dont have to go against you again...
your shit didn't have the complexities that 13ths had, but still
very easy to understand and read..the lines were a littile simple
but the story was just addiciting...by your second to last
paragraph i knew the ending tho..shit this is fuckin tough

tha break down. . .

13th Disciple;

Flow: 7
Vocab: 9.5
On topic: 9
Wordplay: 6
Shock effect: 7.5
Opener: 6
Ending: 8

Total : 53 pts

Sureal ;

Flow: 8
Vocab: 7
On Topic: 9.5
Wordplay: 7
Shock Effect: 9
Opener: 7
Ending: 9

Total : 56.5 pts

Vote - Sureal

(props to both ! )