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WarLord
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IP:
Quote:
Originally posted by ThuG WhytE
wow...if you ever wanted to read a good topical
battle this was it.....shit you guys, that fuckin masterful..
13th - I liked ure shit. . very complex to a simple mans eye
however. I figured halfway through your story what the ending
was..a nice twist none the less
Sureal - Damn im glad i dont have to go against you again...
your shit didn't have the complexities that 13ths had, but still
very easy to understand and read..the lines were a littile simple
but the story was just addiciting...by your second to last
paragraph i knew the ending tho..shit this is fuckin tough
tha break down. . .
13th Disciple;
Flow: 7
Vocab: 9.5
On topic: 9
Wordplay: 6
Shock effect: 7.5
Opener: 6
Ending: 8
Total : 53 pts
Sureal ;
Flow: 8
Vocab: 7
On Topic: 9.5
Wordplay: 7
Shock Effect: 9
Opener: 7
Ending: 9
Total : 56.5 pts
Vote - Sureal
(props to both ! )
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^^^^^^^^DAMN could have explained it more than that
13.....he got you this time...............dawg...........
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