Okay heres what I thought...

13th had me interested through out the whole verse, I wanted to finish it instead of reading the first couples bars. I could imagine his verse with ease, his vocabulary and detail was definitly a HUGE plus in getting him this vote...

Sureal was also very detailed but I felt like it was cut off, the ending was very well written but I didnt feel the alter ego/insane part of the person through out your whole verse like I did in 13th..

In topical I feel image is such an important part off the verse, because when you loose your audiences attention then you wont gain it back.. 13th kept me intrigued..Sureal had me at the end but the begining took to long I feel.

Vote: 13th Diciple