It's a shame you haven't had 1 response and this was a really good writing. You put a lot of emotion in each line, so when I read it, I felt it more. I really don't know what to say about your piece here. You did such a good job writing it. None of the rhyming looked forced at all. The content was really good, it made me kinda sad.

"Grabs a pen and an old paper her thoughts weighing a ton
Her mother so helpless but so needed to blame
Has always been aware, but simply cowers in shame
"I've been hurt since the begining you watched as i mature
My bodies been growing as my soul has been hurt
I'll no longer allow these pains to happen
Please realise this was a much thought of action
I'll love you until death, and even after today
This pain has surmounted me these bullets will help to relay
I can not continue on with this pain soaked life
The joys have not come as often as the strife
Goodbye i must say now, but momma please know
HIs death as well as mine was done so you can grow.
Dont dwell on this burden, find happiness and peace
I have found that in this, much wanted relief"

That letter to mom part was probably my favorite. I thought that part was really good. Keep posting more. Don't worry about all the sleepers in here.