whoa..the abstract structure of the poem awed me...the whole point of releasing such an awesome concept is pretty good..

Your use of words are plain but every single one of them is like important for this piece to be called a poem....

The imagery and sequential events are pretty well written...some vocabs are alright...and yeah ur right i was confused at some parts but i read it the second time and understood it clearly...

ive read a lot of piece that deals with the same concept but the fact that u put much effort on it ...the reality-based like theme really helped a lot...

i liked it...drop more!

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