For sure lose the Caps , but other than that the shit was tight. It was a little long for me ( maybe , you could lose a few lines ) But I know what thats like , once you write your original peice , its hard cutting shit out of it. But your Vocab was spectacular , you had a great range of Methaphors , and I really felt your vibe. Is this your Album ? or a friends ?

(I need some votes on my battle to end it , no schilling , vote for for who you think came more correct )

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