vote=pledge
angelic...your verse was really good, and it had dope vocab and a nice concept, but a lot of it seemed to lack substance.
It talked about all this very poetic stuff that didn't seem to have much meaning.
pledge...I wasn't feeling you until the little boy line "you reap what you sow" I re-read it all after that and it was so much better.
That line clinched it for pledge.
Peace

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