Shiznit's THoughts:

VOCABULARY

>very well thought out...its like really damn good..brilliant!


FLOW

>smooth and not at all perfect but for some reason i read it quite nicely...and heard it was really good


WORDPLAY

>of course the multis definitely aer the factors that really made this piece extraordinary..props

CONTENT

>very nice...the punches establishment was good...keep doin that shit


OVERALL..

>its not at all hard to understand cuz u made some points really self explanatory and supported it with a couple of exessive lines of facts ...thats cool

nice one

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