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Old 07-11-03, 01:16 AM   #1
shiznit
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From: Somewhere uve never been born....
open flames (a not so good verse from yours trully)

IP:

Phenomenal streaks of light dissappeared before my eyes
Darkness tricked my sight with reoccurring path of disguise
Blazing catasthropic emotions inflamed a view sustained
Twice the size twice the pain here standin still amazingly insane
Awed of the infatuation of an element to delivers risky combustion
Visible stimulation waiting to become yellow prematures destruction
Illumination through the air creates glowing ember that ignites death
Tortured heat of extraordinary third degree burns inspired my mind-set
Shadows of firearms and artilleries reproduce massive amount of genocides
Ardor damaged the world entirely like fueling each cry personifides
Lies and deception reappeared and motivates for its smoke to be invisible
Sounds of burning furnace attracts the centered core exceeds to pull
Blending its unique red-orange environment as it turned to fine ashes
Envisoning myself as an obsessed insect devoted to power and malice

Ardor - a speech full of fire


.... some said i put a lot of vocabs in it...just wanna ask what u guys think....i suck at this stuff....constructive critism is very well appreciated...thanks!
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