Rhyming/Flow
This was Tight, Every Bar Had A Smooth Flow To It, Ever line Had A Smooth Flow To It..lol....8/10
Vocab/Wordplay
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The people who told you that you used too much vocab were just idiots
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- Word, One Syllable Writings Are O.k For Freestyling BUt Written Pieces Need To be Complex, Like This! You had Brutal Vocab (You Gonna Get A few People Saying You used A Dictionary Or Somthing For This), Keep Spittin With Vocab Like That dawg!..9/10
Concept/Topic
The Concept Realated To The Topic "Open Flames", You had Lots Of Firery Words, Menaings, Lines IN there...8/10
Overall
8/10 , Not Really Much To IMprove On, Maybe A Bit Longer..But Meh, Killa Drop!