yo, shiznit.. I owe you... so here I go..

the vocab was in abundance, but not at all over dun... I like vocab, u know that.. there wasn't much wordplay, but I'm coked out, so I may be wrong.. the flow was good for the most, a little sketchy in some places but I'm a little sketchy right now too, so reading it was a little hard... it was nice... you really gotta work on delivery and bar length tho I notice, and rotation, some of the rhyme words seemed out-a place...

ne-way.. over all it was good but you do need some elevation.. we all do.. lol, or we'd be rich... stay real gurl

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