very good,

i'm not kidding

your internal rhyme scheme was mad dope
and the vocab was really good it flowed very
nicely. believe me, you don't suck at this stuff
keep dropping these! just write like all day and
keep dropping em' ...

Shadows of firearms and artilleries reproduce massive amount of genocides
Ardor damaged the world entirely like fueling each cry personifides



woah ^...how can you say that sucked?
umm yeah right...this was above dope,
i'm not kidding...VERY nice job......


11 out of 10....


pz

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