Daaaaaaaaaamn! I am eternally, extremelly, undeniably, and unbelievably impressed. You have a story telling ability. Obviously the endings was good, but it was sweet how you mentioned the dirty walls before the end. The second part was tight. I can't believe you were able to have such a good rhyme scheme. I'll say it again... Damn.
peace

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