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Old 07-13-03, 07:20 AM   #1
phoenix808
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From: the darkest corners of my mind
Requiem for Hope

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Requiem for Hope

Peace is but a shadow of death,
Desperate to forget its painful past,
Though we hope for promising years,
After shedding a thousand tears,
Yesterday's sorrow constantly nears,
And while the moon still shines blue,
By dawn, it will turn to scarlet hue,
And the past will repeat anew.

Conflict is a reflection of the present,
Never far away from everything and anything,
Gone are the nights of constant heartache,
For the feasts and loves that we all partake,
And here are the fears that we can't shake,
Hidden in a place of uneasiness,
Are the thoughts and actions that led to this,
But all's so easily fixed by death's kiss.

Love is the greatest of human emotions,
Directing almost all of what we say and do,
Constantly searching for our one true love,
Going place to place like a beautiful dove,
And knocked to the ground by a cold hearted shove,
So everyday we keep on trying,
But losing love so often that we feel like dieing,
So we trudge along, all the while sighing.

fin

I'm not to proud of that last rhyme, but i really want to hear feedback on this one plz
peace
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