nah.. these kids are dick ryders or some shit man.. honestly I thought the flow was way off any kind-a rotation.. vocab was good, but in some places it fucked up the flow.. like you put to many syllables beside eachother.. like this:

"beat beat and assualt n battery leaving critical~ lyrical~
dentrimental ~on~ instrumentals-".... the flow in that seemed choppy...

and this

"diss you out of a PET~peave i hate SHEEP-(first clone animal)
i set the tone....call ONYX when it vomits from my mouth-
fuck it call an ECLIPSE whan i SUN(SON) this bitch i BLACKOUT-
pull stunts-".. <--- there was a'ight wordplay there, but it seemed like in the onyx line was just words you threw in to make it rhyme..

sorry dawg, you know we boyz but I gotta say yo uslacked on this one... peace..

thx for the shoutout by the way...

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