FAGET M.C.'S NEED TO REALIZE!
MY ILL talent you qoute~others~will deep throat-
you frontin with NUTtin like i busted in you with three coats-

resight-write in SIONIDE-
the ability to conja~a~montra-of metaphor
spit~mix with my carbon monoxide-

once released~this~peace
turn my spit from licidc pain~to acidic rain-

i won't be denied-
cause most m.c.'s cant go the FULL LENGTH like being unsircumsized-

email my rhymes-
to wack rappers give them a peace of my mind-
if they give me a peace of brains-fine!
i'll pay them back with a choice between homicide-
and suicide-
then leave them flatlined-

rip raps seperate hyms with a hyphen-
flow like fire hydrens-
put bitch m.c.'s in the hymlic-
and pop his ovaries and hymen-
raise the styphen-

i'm mentaly unbalanced my brains at a higher level-
revel- in the fact my style of rap makes treble-
tremble-
beat beat and assualt n battery leaving critical~ lyrical~
dentrimental ~on~ instrumentals-

apply skill? you couldn't apply.... to be a REAL m.c.-
for lacken the essential~credentials-

clone me?
you to weak... to meak-
diss you out of a PET~peave i hate SHEEP-(first clone animal)

i set the tone....call it DARKNESS when it vomits from my heartless mouth-
fuck it call it an ECLIPSE whan i SUN(SON) this bitch i BLACKOUT-

twisting my rhymes even in mime is a stunt-
add an ADDLIB burn you like BLUNT-
killa lines refined searching for fake m.c.'s on the hunt-

in a MINUTE-
(I SPIT 0-60) BUT IN BARS NOT SPEED LIMIT-
and still have police hittin me for a ticket-

it's NONCENTZ bitch im still talking-
im so raw i can catch D-U-I's while walking.

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Dayum kid this shit is blazin..dope verse..nice punches..peep ma shit
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=66485

UPPIN THANX TWIN

that shit was hott. the flow was crazy and you had good multies and a very superb vocab. fantastic drop man....

nah.. these kids are dick ryders or some shit man.. honestly I thought the flow was way off any kind-a rotation.. vocab was good, but in some places it fucked up the flow.. like you put to many syllables beside eachother.. like this:

"beat beat and assualt n battery leaving critical~ lyrical~
dentrimental ~on~ instrumentals-".... the flow in that seemed choppy...

and this

"diss you out of a PET~peave i hate SHEEP-(first clone animal)
i set the tone....call ONYX when it vomits from my mouth-
fuck it call an ECLIPSE whan i SUN(SON) this bitch i BLACKOUT-
pull stunts-".. <--- there was a'ight wordplay there, but it seemed like in the onyx line was just words you threw in to make it rhyme..

sorry dawg, you know we boyz but I gotta say yo uslacked on this one... peace..

thx for the shoutout by the way...

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try this fix up

this shit was tight good vocab and all so who was this directed too seems like you got some beef with some mcee or somethin well any way keep spittin you know i aint much on words so one

tight drop sweet flow peace

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Glad To See LoL Still Keepin It Raw

But Dude I'm Serious On The Audio Tip - Shit Would Sound
Real Hot With A Beat Behind U

Flow Was On Point - Lyrics Were Nice - A Little Simple In
Some Places But Do U

Keep Ya Head Up Homie

~1~

UPIIN