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Old 07-21-03, 08:44 PM   #2
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Very emotional yet well put. This just bought me into it, and kept there right to the end. Imagery used well. Solid use of vocab with sentences constructed to very good effect. Had a feel of mild rawness, in a quite controlled way.

No critique. A very good piece.

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