Rhyming/Flow
Was Nice, It Flowed Smooth Pretty Throught The Whole Song. You Had Good Rhyming Even In The non-Rappin Bits.The Structure Was Dope As Well...7/10

Vocab/Wordplay
You Used The Rigth Words To EXpress The Emotion..word. Some Of It : "Thee" etc. Made iT Sound Like Shakespeare BUt It Was Good. Well Played out....8/10

Concept/Topic
THis Is Where You Really Shined. A Great Topic (Maybe A Little PLayed), BUt You Made It Your Own. Not Once Did Your Stray, Ever Stanza Had a meaning, Every Bar Had Concept Behind It..word....8/10

Overall
This Was A Great Read. We Don't get Many Of Those In Open Mic Now! You Showed Your True Potential n' Skill Behind This Piece, Could'nt See Anything To Improve It on...8/10

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